Thursday, February 28, 2008

Practice News Story 6: Press Relesase

NEWS RELEASE

ClearPoint Instruction LL

Mary Ann Parlin President

Contact:

Amber Winward Media Contact

Phone:

666-999-6354 (Office)


For Immediate Release

LOGAN- ClearPoint Instruction is making a break threw on educating patients at local hospitals. The companies founder Mary Ann Parlin researched patients at local hospitals. She found when patients don’t know what is happening they are un happy, procedures take longer and recovery is longer. Doctors and nurses try to educate their patients but it slows down the doctors, nurses and patients. ClearPoint will assist doctors by telling patients what they need to do, and what the doctors are going to be doing.

ClearPoint wants to bring education to patients; currently they have three different instructional pamphlets and seven DVD’s. ClearPoint believes in instructional education, all the DVD’s show many different processes that patients can go threw. ClearPoint demonstrates surgeries to giving birth. After a patient watches or reads about what they are going to go through they come into the hospital knowing exactly what to do, sparing doctors and nurses a lot of time. Preston Parker, Senior Vice President, said, “When patients are educated they go through the processes faster, feel more secure, and are happier.” ClearPoint hopes to bring awareness to the community about their goals and how they are trying to help patients and doctors alike.

Amber Winward
Public Relations Manager
666-999-5427 (Cell)


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6 comments:

Colby Bair said...

Hey good job. To be honest i didn't really get how to do this assignment, so yours is probably way better than mine. It all made sense to me..good quote too!

m e g a n said...

Your ending was really strong! I liked it a lot! The quote was the perfect touch! Good work!

Cody Littlewood said...

I think you did an excellent job. Great boilerplate and you really have some talent. I was impressed with your professional and concise writing. Radical.

Anonymous said...

Hey! Your press release was well written. There were some grammar problems and like punctuation and stuff but other than that you did awesome. Good work!

hanah said...

You did a good job. Good quote. Good use of time. Good work!

Amy Lyn said...

Amber-
Great job on this press release. All of the information was clear and easy to read.